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Awesome awesome awesome.......

Superb start buddy. ......

Just brilliant flow ..and explanation....

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Super plot hai story ka bro...

And hero ka nature bhi perfectly describe Kiya hai...

Thanxxxx for the hard work and awesome new story dude...

And congrats for the new thread
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Story me sad feeling ko hatao jald se jald...
Ab tak bore krdiya story ne, thoda khul ke likho,
Story ko ese mt likho jaise kisi ko samjha rahe ho, character me ghuso, tbi kahani best banegI..
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third person se story likh raha hu bhai kyoki maine kuch update third person hoker likhe the aur usse fir mohit me likhne me kafi time barbad hota hai iss liye...likhe huye update post karne ke baad fir se mohit ki jabani likho gaa

Usne aaj ek black shirt black formal paint aur black shose black watch pehna hua tha ek line me kaho toh fully man in black.....mohit ke ghar se college aadhe ghante ka rasta tha ayr aadhe ghante baad woh college aata hai.....mohit ki looking aur styal ko sab ladkiya ghoor rahi thi par mohit toh mohit tha woh sidha admission form lene jata hai toh waha bahut bidh thi mohit line me khada ho jata hai ek ghante baad mohit ki bari aati hai par woh form leta uss se pehle ek stylish girl jo sakal aur kapdo se lag rahi thi kafi amir hai mohit ko piche kar khud form lene lagti hai mohit kuch nhi bolta woh ladki form lekar chali jati hai mohit do form lekar bhar deta hai aur fee jama kar 2 ghante me free ho jata hai....mohit ne gita ka form toh bhar diya tha iss liye usse inform karne ke liye call karta hai uss waqt gita mohit ke khayalo me khoyi huyi thi....mohit ka call dekh woh khush ho jati hai

Gita:-mohit aapne mujhe phone kiya woh bhi 6 month baad wow today i am so happy mohit

Mohit:-meri baat toh sun lo yaa khushi jahir karna hai

Gita:-nhi pehle mujhe meri khushi toh jahir karne dijiye fir bolna jo bolna ho

Mohi:-gita meri baat sun rahi ho ya phone cut karo

Gitanirash ho) har waqt gusse me kyo rehte ho chlo teek hai bolo kya baat hai

Mohit:-maine tumhra ****** iss college me admission kara diya hai do din ke baad class suru hogi join kar lena

Gita:-(gusse se) mujhe nhi padna..kyo meri fee pay karte ho aap.kya ristha hai hamra kyo har kadam pe saath khade hote ho jab main dundti hu toh kahi gyab ho jate ho.mujhe nhi padna ab maat kiya karo meri madat kon Hu main apki bolo

Mohit:-dekho gita main behas nhi karna chahta.tumhri madat karta hu kyoki tum achi student ho aur tumhe madat ki jarurt hai bas iska galt matlb mat niklo aur class join kar lena aur padai pe dhyan do faltu baato pe nhi

Gita:-teek hai jaise aap kahe bas ek baat baata do aap bhi ussi college me ho naa pls sach bolna aap ko meri kasam

Mohit:-haa bas ab class laga lena aur iska galt mtlb maat sachna samjhi

Gita:-ji main sahi matlb hi samjh rahi hu.aakhir apni bibi ki help karna har pati ka dharam hota hai

Mohit:-gusse me) tum......

(Mohit kuch aage bolta uss se pehle phone cut ho jata hai mohit waha se nikal ke canteen jata hai canteen me naina bhi baithi thi apni friends ke saath....mohit canteen se chai aur kuch khane ko leta hai aur ek table pe baith jata hai woh naina ki tarf dekhta bhi nhi baat karne ki baat toh bahut dur ki hai..table ek hi khali thi pura canteen bhara pada tha mohit ko baithe 5 mint huye the ke naina ke 3 friend jo uske saath the woh mohit ko dekh fida ho jati hai aur naina se

Ladki 1:-yar naina dekh na kitna handsome ladka aaya hai kya body hai aur chikna toh itna ke ladkiya bhi khubsurt nhi hogi

Ladki 2:-ha re tune sahi kaha vaise yeh naya aaya lagta hai chlo pata karte hai

Ladki 3:-mera toh maan kar raha hai abhi baho me jakad lu chlo na baat karte hai uss se vaise bhi jounier hoga

Apni dosto ki baat sun naina ko acha nhi lagta iss liye unn par badak jati hai

Naina:-tum teeno pagal ho kisi ladke ko dekha nhi lar tapkane lagte ho iss jaise toh kitne ladke hai hamre college me

Naina ki baat sun teeno ladkiya ghorne lagti hai

Ladki 1:-teri aakhe kharab ho gyi hai kya iss se acha koi aur chal haat

Ladki 3:-yar yeh try karna chahti hai iss liye bol rahi ha aisa

Naina:-oh oh break lago aur jao tum teeno try kar lo agar mohit ne baat bhi kar li toh mujhe kehna

Naina ne yeh kya kar diya ab teeno kha jane wali feeling de rahi thi naina ko naina bhi samjh gyi flow flow me usne jada bol diya

Ladki 2:-kamini kutti tu janti hai usse

Naina:-hakla kar) nhi nhi main kaha janti hu

Ladki 3:-sach bol samjhi...tu nhi janti toh uska naam kaise pata tujhe

Naina:-arre woh toh aise hi maine bol diya tum bhi naa

Koi aur kuch aur bolta iss se pehle ladki 1 khadi ho mohit ki tarf muh kar jor se

Ladki 1:-hay mohit

Mohit uss tarf dekhta hai naina aur uske friend ko dekh kar mohit kuch samjh nhi paata par hay ka reply haath hila ke deta hai teek ussi waqt woh hi-fi ladki mohit ke table pe baith jati hai kyoki kahi aur jagah hi nhi thi wahi dursi tarf naina ki halat buri thi aur apne hi bhai ko bura bhala bol rahi thi

Ladki 1:-kuttiya tu nhi janti usse ab bol

Naina:-woh kya hai....

ladki 3:-haa main janti hu toh

Ladki 3:-pehle bolne pe teri chut patt rahi thi dekh uske saath kitni hot ladki baith gyi ab ghanta ghas dale gaa hum jaisi average girl ko aur iss hur pari ko mohit hi mila tha pure college me mera mohit

Ladki 2:-chup karo tum dono aur naina tu mujhe baata tu use janti kaise hai sach bolna nhi hum jaan le lenge tumhri abhi kyoki race kafi Strong ladki se hai tu dekh chuki hai

Naina:-wohhhh mera chota bhai hai

Teeno:-kyaaaaaaaa??????

Ladki 3:-jao kaminiyo koi cold drinks lekar aa naina ji ke liye

Ladki 2:-dekh naina tu toh mujhe achi tarrh se janti hai pls mujhe apni bhabhi bana le

Ladki 1:-yar naina tu kuch bhi bol tere liye sab karo gyi pls tere bhai se dosti kara de baki main khud kar lugi

Naina:-oh heloo bas okkk.....ek baat kaan khol ke sun lo kisi aur ko pata laga na ke mohit mera bhai hai toh jaan se maar dalo gyi aur uss se dosti toh bhul jao paida hone se ab tak ussne mujhse baat nhi ki toh tumse kya khak kare gaa ek number ka sadu hai yar koi feeling hi nhi hai usme aur jo ladki iske pas baithi hai woh bhi bor ho ke aage se nhi bulye gyi chahe dekh liyo

Ab teeno mohit ki tarf muh kar lete hai wahi jab woh ladki mohit ke pas baithi thi uske aage kya hua suru se baata hu

Ladki:-helo handsome kya main yaha baith sakti hu

Mohit:-ya sure..

Ladki:-(baith kar haath aage bada) hay i am sanjana 1st year aur tum bhi 1st year ho i am right

Mohi:-(bina haath milye) ji main mohit 1st year

(Mohit ki iss harkat se naian ki teeno dosto ki aakho chodi ho jati hai wahi mohit ke samne wali ladki haki baki reh jati hai)

Sanjana:-mohit kya tum idiot ho itni sunder aur hot ladki haath pakdne ka moka de rahi hai aur tum ho ke par jo bhi tumhra andaz acha laga mujhe laga sab mujh par marte hoge par mere ghamad ko tum ne chur chur kar diya aur samjha diya har koi mera diwana nhi hai

Mohit:-mujhe galat matt samjhna sanjana ji aap sach me khusurt ho

Sanjana:-toh aap ne haath kyo nhi milya

Mohit:-sorry sanjana ji par mujhe kisi se dosti karna acha nhi lagta

Sanjana:-main toh tum se hath milna chahti thi tum itne handsome jo ho

Mohit:-chodiye sanjana ji main kisi ka dost nhi banta aur aap se bhi yahi umid karo gaa ke mujhse dosti ki umed maat kijiye gaa

(Sanjana aur mohit baat kar rahe the wahi naian ke teeno dosto ke dil jal rahe the itne main canteen me kuch gunde type ke student aa jate hai aur sanjana ko dekh sanjana ke pas aa jate hai)

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