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new story update 1 Veer ( kalyug ka maha yodha )





Kahani suru hoti hai dopar yug ke ant se jab mahabarat ka yudh khatam hua



Adharm pe dharm ki vijay hui ..
Adharm apni har se bahut gusse me agaya issi gusse ki wajah se uski urja se ek balak ka janm hua ..


Jo shaitani saktio ka malik tha bachha kuchi der me bada ho gaya
Adharm USS bachhe ko dekhkar khus ho gaya ..



Adharm : ab mai apne haar ka badla le sakunga devtao tumne kya socha tha kalyug suru ho gayi to mai dharti par nahi ja payunga to tum jeet gaye hahahahahaha



Ye dekho meri urja se bana mera beta ye jayega or duniya me burai hi burai hogi
Hahahahaha ..



Devlok : sabhi devta dharm ki vijay se khus the pure dev lok me khusi ka mahol tha dev sabha me nritya gaan chal raha tha



Tabhi waha guru brihaspati agaye unke ate hi nritya gaan band karwa diya gaya .


Devta : pranam gugudev


Devguru: vijaya bawa


Devta : ascharya se gurudev ham abhi koi yudh me nahi ja rahe to fir ye vijaya vaba ka asirbad kiu


Devguru: kiu ke sankat ka janm ho gaya hai


Devta : kaisa samkat gurudev


Devguru: app sabhi ke liye buri khabar hai adharm ne apni Kali urja se ek balak ko banaya hai Jo shaitani saktio ka malik hai..


ab WO us ko dharti pe bej diya hai dharti lok WO balak waha pap failayega duniya se pyar or punya ko dhire dhire mitayega .

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Sabhi devta chintit ho gaye kiu ke abhi dharti par kalyug he to koi bhi dev abtar nahi le sakta ye bidhi ka vidhan hai .


Devta : gurudev apto jante hai abhi koi bhi dev dharti lok ja nahi sakta us dusht ko khatam karne to aaphi koi upai bataye..


hame kya karna chahiye is sankat ke sthitime app hi hame marg dikhaiye


Devguru: apni ankhe band karte hai or divya dtisti se dekhte hai fir apni akhe khol


Aaj se 100 sal bad jab maha purnima hogi us din bramha muhurt me ek balak ka janm hoga WO balak bahut hi nek dil sabse pyar karne wala hoga...



agar panch bhut ke devta apni apni urja ka ek ek hissa us balak me samahit kare..


jab WO balak apni akh pehli bar kholega jab uska man nirmal hoga



Devta : tabto WO balak bachpan sehi bahut saktisali hoga


Dev guru : ha hoga lekin uski saktio ko usme chupake rakhna hoga jabtak uski umra 18 sal na ho jaye kiu ki agar uski sakti jagrit rahi to shaitan ko uska abhas ho jayega


fir us bachhe ko khatra ho sakta hai or sirf sakti dena hi kafi nahi hoga usko uchit siksha or yudh kala ki bhi shiksha deni hogi ..



Devta: gurudev ye kaise mumkin hoga kiu ki ham mese waha koi bhi nahi ja payega ye to app jante hai fir kon chupa kar rakh payega panch tatwa ki sakti ko us balak ke ander..



Devguru : ha sirf ekhi hai Jo ye kar payenge



Devta : kon hai WO guruji.


Devguru : vagwan Vishnu ke abtar yodhao ke yodha guru o ke guru bagwan parshuram WO amar hai..


issiliye abhivi dharti lok me hai lekin unhone astra tyag diye hai or esvakt sadhna me hai



Devta: gurudev kya WO hamari sahayita karenge kiu ki WO abhi gusse me hai apne tin sisso ke karan jinhone adharm ka sath diya mahavarat me issiliye unhone sadhna me baithne ka nischay kiya tha



Kya wo firse us bachhe ko apna sisya banayenge


Devguru : unko manana hoga barna hamari udesdya puri nahi ho payegi



Devta: thik hai gurudev bagwan parshuram mahadev ke bakt hai agar mahadev kahe to WO onki bat nahi talenge



Fir sabhi devta pahuch gaye mahadev ke pass


Devta : pranam mahadev


Mahadev : devtao mujhe pata hai app sabhi kis uddesya aye hai



Devta : mahadev ham sabhi badi unmid se apke pass ayehe apse sahaita ke kiye



Mahadev : thik hai mai parshuram ko uss bachheko siksha dene ke liye mana lunga ap sabhi nischint rahe


Devta : khusi se dhanwad mahadev
Fir sabhi devta lot aye apne devlok
Udhar guru parshuram Himalaya ke ek vishesh gufa me sadhna me Lin tha


Tabhi parshuram ke man me mahadev ki awaj gunji


Mahadev : wats parshuram


Parshuram : pranam mahadev


Mahadev : wats mai tumhe ek karya dena chahta hu kya tum WO karoge


Parshuram: mahadev aggya kare mera ye jivan dhanya ho jayega agar apki kisi karya aya


Mahadev : wats ajse 100 baras bad maha purnima ke bramha muhurt me ek balak ka janm hoga usne panch tatwa devo ke milit urja hogi..


Jise tumhe siksha or yudh kala sikhani hogi jisse age chalke WO duniya se pap or shaitan ko mar sake or jabtak WO bachha 18 sal ka na ho jayi uski rakhsha or uski saktiya bhi chupani hogi



Parshuram: apki agaya sirodharya mahadev


100 sal bad duniya puri badal gayi thi Charo or nafrat hingsha Mara mati
Kahi dharm ke naam pe kahi bhasa ke naam pe kahi rang bed ke nam pe
Duniya se iswar ke liye astha lagbag khatam honeko thi



Delhi ke sabse bade hospital ke pregnancy ward me ek aurat dard se chikh rahi thi
Aj uske bete ka janm hone wala tha


abi kuchi der me subha honeko thi tabhi ward ke ek khidki se suraj ki pehli kiran us aurat pe padi
Oooomasaaa


Tabhi bachhe ka janm hua jab bachhe ne akh kholi tabhi khidkise ek roshni ka gola us bachhe me samagayi


bachhe ka pura badan bhatti ke tarha garam hone laga or bachhe ki Rone ki awaje ane lagi


Doctor : bachhe ko letake ohhh ye bachha to bhatti ke tarah garam ho gaya ye kaise possible hai or WO roshni kya thi



Nurse : ohh may God doctor ye dekhiye is bachhe ki ankhe



Dortor : how is this possible iski ankhe to puri blue hai ye kaise mumkin hai
Tavi waha roshni chamakti hai or koi ata hai us roshni se sabhi behose ho jate hai


WO admi bachhe ke sar par hath rahta hai fir gayab waha WO admi nahi tha



Doctor ko hosh ajata hai nurseko bhi hosh ajata hai par unko kuch yaad nahi rahta kya hua tha jab WO bachhe ko dekhte hai to bachha normal tha


unko kuch bhi yaad nahi abhi kya hua tha bas ye yaad hai ladka paida hua
Bachhe ki ma ko bhi hosh agayi


Doctor : Mubarak ho apko ladka hua hai


Ma : kaha hai mera bachha tabhi nurse bachhe ko make pass leta deti hai ma to bachhe ko pyar se chumne lagti hai



Doctor bahar jata hai Jaha bachhe ka pita besabri se khuskhabri ka intezar kar raha tha


Doctor : Mubarak ho vikram sahab apke ghar beta paida hua hai


Vikram : thank you doctor thank you apko pata hi nahi apne mujhe kitni badi khuskhabri di hai thank you veri much



Doctor : yeh to mera farz tha well jab party rakhiyega hame jarur bulayiyega



Vikram : jarur doctor jarur Kya mai ma or bachhe se mil sakta hu



Doctor : bas thodi derme onko ward me sift kar diya jayega fir mil lijiyega


Fir vikram phone nikal ta hai or kisiko phone lagata hai


Vikram : ha ma app dadi ban gayi apka pota agaya hai hamare wansh ka chirag agaya hai app taiyari karlo uske swagat ka fir kuch sun ke thik hai ma bad me bat karta hu call kat car deta hai


Kuch der bad
Ward me


Vikram : dekho to ye bilkul tumpe gaya hai kitna sundar hai kitna akarshan hai isme , shalini tumne mujhko meri jindagi ki sabse badi khusi de di hai mera varish



Uska nam danveer hoga ye dono hatho se bhi agar doulat batega firvi khatam nahi hogi or Singh khandan ka warish hai to veer to hona hi hai issiliye danveer



Shalini : kya apbi apne nam bhi rakh diya isko ham veer bulayenge mera pyara veer
Dono aisehi bate karte rahte hai



Wohi dusri taraf shaitan ko dharti par kisi maha sakti ki tarango ka ahsas hota hai magar jabtak WO us tarango ka picha kar usko dhundta WO sakti tarange gayab ho gayi


shaitan koi shuk ho jata hai jarur devtao ne kisiko beja hai usko Marne ke liye magar WO kon hai kaha hai ye nahi pata


..frnds..yeh story main aap sabhi ko samarpit karta hu aap sabhi ke liye he likhuga
Mai app sabhi se bas pyar or sath ki asha karta hu ..pintu

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dear for your first thread...
Title bahut achha hai story ka ...
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Nice starting dear...
Story ki starting bhi bilkul alag ki hai aapne...
Padhte wakt mujhe laga ki mai khud dwapar yug me hoon..
Aur jab aapne kalyug me faili kuritiyon ke baare me bataya to sach me aisa laga jaise meri hi aankhon ke ssamne ho raha ho...
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