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Sameera aur Rajesh ant mein ek ho jaayenge 14 66.67%
Sameera aur Rajesh hamesha ke liye bichad jaayenge 1 4.76%
Sameera aur Rajesh bas ek dost ki haisiyat se reh jayenge 0 0%
Sameera ya Rajesh mein se kisi ek ki maut ho jaayegi 2 9.52%
ya kuch aur hi hoga 4 19.05%
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Kuch doston ko shikayat hai ke Romance pe maine kabhi nahi likha. To lijiye hazir hai

Ishq Pyaar Mohabbat


Ab Ishq kahen, ya Pyaar kahen, ya Mohabbat kahen to yaad aata hai Mir ka ek sher

Ishq hai ishq ye majak nahi
chand lamhon mein faisla na karo

Lekin hota kya hai chand lamhon ke faisle maslan Love at first sight, jara si anban hui nahi ke tera raasta alag mera alag, aur kabhi to tamam waqt gujar dete hain saath jine marne ke wade karte hue ki jara sa shaq un wadon kasmon ki waat laga deta hai aur samne aa jaata hai eham, aur jab tak us eham se chutkara paate hain jindagi kisi aur raaste pe chali jaati hai, reh jata hai bas ek pachtava.

Bahut kuch hota hai is Ishq Pyaar Mohabbat ke daur mein. Chalo dekhte hain iski kuch jhalkiyaan kyunki iske rang itne hain ke sabhi rangon pe likhna agar shuru kar diya to tamam umra bas is kahani ko likhte hue gujar jaayegi par ye kahani khatam nahi hogi.

Is kahani ke patron ke baare mein main kuch nahi bolunga, vo apni pehchan khud karate jaayenge, halanki ye kahani poori tarha se kalpanik hai, par kahin na kahin ismein ek sach bhi dikhayi dega kyunki Ishq Pyaar Mohabaat ke kisi na kisi rang se hamara kabhi na kabhi waasta pad hi jaata hai, ya to khud apna hi aks najar aane lagega, ya fir kisi karibi dost ka, jo aise hi kisi daur se gujra ya gujri ho.




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Andhera sa kamra, diwaron pe jahan dekho bas ek hi naam likha hua tha, har taraf, har angle se, kahin pyaar se, kahin gusse se, kahin us likhawat mein ek pukar thi, kahin us likhwat mein ek arzoo thi, kahin us likhawat mein nafrat thi, har vo ehsas jo ek insan mein hota hai, har vo ehsas jo ek mohabaat karne wala mehsus karta hai, vo sab tha , par us kamre ki diwaron tak simat ke reh gaya tha.
how emotional yaar… kitna sad hai ye banda… uff kitni takleef me hai… jarur pagal pann ki wajah yahi naam hai jiska jikra wo deewaaron kar kar raha hai… naam ko pyaar karna aur likh kar kaat dena … hmm ekk dard bhari dastaan se robaroo hone ke liye ready hain ham sab…


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Anjali ne aaj pehli baar Sunaina ko is haalat mein dekha tha. Vo bhag ke uske pass jaati hai, use khinch apne gale se laga leti hai ' bol de meri jaan, nikal de dil mein base mavad ko varna jeena mushkil ho jaayega'

jane kya chal raha hai sunaina ke dimag me… iss tarah rona kisi chhipi huyi takleef ki taraf ishara kar raha hai…


bht achhe likhe hain sir… dono kahaniya sath me koi talluk to nahi dono ka

eagerly waiting for more sir…
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pahla upu mast hai vikas jahan exam ki soch raha hai...wahin rakesh aur panter logis aashique ka dengue faila rahe hai....
Upu 2 mujhe laga ye log ghar me hai ...lekin hai library me tabhi sochu agyat library me se kaise nikla.... larki logis te3n larki aur te3n larke ye to mamla set hai(eak aur larka bhi tha sayad)..Anjali ko chheda ja raha hai....aab ise kya hoo gaya sunaina aur agyaat me kuch fight hua hai kya dekhte hai aage.......
Upu 3 aab ye rajni kaun hai..lagta hai unki dost hogii.....
Khair jodi mill gaya 4-4 hoo gaye....
Rajan-rajni
Anjali-Vikash
Sunaina-Agyaat
Rakesh-Priyanka(shayad)
Kya bhai aapne bhi aisa scene daal diya lekin sunaina aur agyaat ke beech hua kya hai jisse agyaat itna bekabu hoo gaya....priyanka ke sath bahut bura hua....lekin gadhe agyaat ke dost use chhudaye tak nahi......
Upu-4 pyar me lagta hai dhoka mila hai lagta hai tabhi to diwar par aise sameera ka naam likh kar mar raha hai...waise kaun hai ye unsan aur kaun hai ye sameera..
Upu-5 bacha liya dosto ne agyaat ko nahi to agar vo na marte use to bheed se jarur pitata ... itna confusion kiko dalne ka aab kya raaj hai agyaat ka
Upu-6 abe pahle ilaj to bata jo hospital le ja rahe ho khamkha hame confusion me dale hue hai...ohooo aab samajh aaya ye us admi ki baat kar raha hai...raj bhai suspence dal dal ke
Upu-7
mst hai
sahi kaha...
fir se suspence daal diya lekin thoda samajh aaya.. sayad ye larki sameera thi(mere khayal se)...aab ye sangeeta samera ko kaise janti hai
sarkar
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Read all.. Gazab bhai.. ju ki lekhni par kuchh kahna to hamare bas ka hi nahi hai.. Har rang dikha rahe ho pyaar ka.. ek taraf dard hai Agyaat ke bhai ka wahi ek or mohabbat ko aazmane ki chaah... like Sunainaa nd Rajan.. Priyanka ka Dil bhi saayad agyaat ke liye ek alag mod lega.. (just a wild thought ). Ye london wali ladki sameera hi lag rahi hai.. but aakhir inke saath hua kya hai.. Very eagerly waiting to know... nd Saayad apne bhai ki ye dasha ke karan hi agyaat Pyaar se door bhaagta hai.. (But iska Sunainaa se kya sambandh hai... ) Kahani dhamakedaar hone wali hai.. Jaldi jaldi post karo sir jiii...




kya baat hai..Is baar Romance section me aag lagane ki thaan li hai ju ne...

Mastt ja rahi hai story... very eagerly waiting to know what's next. post asap
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Haaashhhh…… saans rok kar padh rahi thi mai but haye re suspence… hmm to pagal wala ladka agyat ka bro hai… ann london wali ladki ??? Kyu ro rahi tji… omg kahi wo hi to sameera nahi.… but sunaina kyu behoshhhh… aur agyat ke nafrat ki vajahhh… wooh update ne thrilled kar diya sir ji…

uss ladke ke bare me me jis tarike se aap ne likha un panktiyon ne aansu nikal diye… bht achhi story hai sir…sach me kahani ka title to Pyar tune kya kiya hona tha
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P.S. - Agar review accha na lage to ek Bakwas samjh kar kare aur bhul jaye.

To chalo shuru se shuru krta hu......

ishtory ki starting kafi promising hui har koi shayar banne pe utaru ho gaya.. Vese shayari ke bina Aashiqi/Lovegiri adhuri hi hoti h.
ju ne bhi shayari likhne me koi kasar na chhodi na update me na thread me.. for it.

Jaise jaise ishtory age badhi vese vese hi characters ke bare me jana.

Anjali, Vikas se silent love karti h.. Ye ladkiya bhi na kabhi age se kuch bol ni sakti.

ishtory ke mahaj ek-do update me hi jabardast twist aye jab Sunaina rote hui college se bahar bhag gayi aur Priya madam apni dost ke tears ka badla lene Agyat ke pas pahunch gayi ... Madam ji bat kya h pahle vo to Jan lete. Ab ho gaya na bhugto.

Ab hoga Sunaina, Agyat aur Priya ke bich love triangle... I'll love it .

Sameera - isne ab tak bahut curiosity gain ki h.. Akhir h kaha ye iska Sunaina se kya rishta h
iski aur us ladke (Agyat ke bhai, Rajesh) ki love story me kafi complications h.. Vese agar love me complications na ho to love me maza kaha.

Last update to kya Rajesh pagal hone ka natak kar rela h leke kyu kyu kyu shayad apne kisi experiment ke liye.

Ju ki har ishtory me Rajesh ka character itna complicated kyu hota hai akhir bat kya h

Ab ate h writing pe to Vo to fabulous rahi hai and is bar to Aag laga di Romance section me bahut accha kam se kam kuch to naya aur Alag padhne ko milega.

Sach me yar bahut mast likh re ho.. Maza a ra h padhte huye.. Ye Un ek do ishtories me se hai jise me regular follow kar ra hu in Romance.

Note - Romance writer koi agar Galti se is review ko padh le to dil pe na le... Agar lena ho lo mujhe kya.
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zabardast updates sarkaar ..

mein ye story nahi padh rha tha ye sochke k ..

Sarkaar to incest aur adultry writer hai romance kya likhega ..

But is story ko padhne k baad pata chala Ju hero writer ho ..

Dard bhari kahani lagta hai .

Har update me girgit ki tarah rang badal rha hai ..

Pehlr mujhe laga pool wali ladki sameena hai magar woh sakina nikli ..

Phir rajesh ka jhoota pagal hona ..

Kamal kar diya sarkaar ..

dil karta hai Ju ka dimaagh choom lu ..

Jo aisi story usme aya ..

Aik hi shikayat hai bs ..

Reguler update dene ka ..
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Abstounding ....
I cannt believe u r non medico Mr M.
Only a doctor can know post grad preference of Derma over surgery.
Either u r a doctor or ur IQ is above 140.
Ur story is taking nail biting turns...
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4th updt read kr liya..mast lag rhi story...4 dost aur 4 girls...jakar seedhe chata mar diya...aur fir smooch..idhar hospital me kaun h pagal sa..mast lg rhi...apun ko is type ki suspence wali love story bahut pasand...kal kosis krta hu poora read krne ki

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ओ बच गई लड़की । हो क्या रहा इधर लव स्टोरी मे इतना तगडा स्सपेस । दो लड़के बेचारी लड़की के नोकीला पेचकस गले मे जाता तो राम नाम सत हो जाता कौन थे लड़के और कार बाले कौन थे । लड़की को ठीक ठाक घर छोड़ गये । पर परेशान कार बाले भी । reading next

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U tease like hell for updates...
Dying to see what Rajesh is going to sing ...
Wat a romantic writer u r...
U can make any girl mad in love
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no words for this true love words
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Adbhut...
I m speechless.
Each word is pearl.
Hats off
U r a genius
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A good writer can make his reader laugh and cry with in 5 min.
Which u did just now.
Romantic memories in flashback are amazing only if u r still together otherwise it hurts like hell...
I m lacking adjectives to compliment u
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sameera ke jate hi raj bhi apne room par pahunch gaya… apne ublte jazbaton ko shawer se thanda naa kar paya par uski tadap ko sameera ki door se hawa ke sath aati khushboo aur jhalak ne kaafi hadd tak sukoon de diya… ye ishq hai… pyaar hai…yahi muhobbat hai…

Kabhi khushoo , kabhi jhonka , kbhi hawa sa lage…
juda hokar bhi tu mujhse juda juda sa lage…

bilkul yahi haal hai sameera ka apne rajesh ke bina… past ki khoobsurat yaadon ko apne dil me sanjoye kabhi hasti kabhi roti jaane kaun si jindgi jee rahi hai wo…

superbb update sir ji

Romance in the air… aur readers ko chahiye padhne ko matter… pileezzu jaldi dijiye update
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Upu13
Suruwat .. se kiya aapne laga wahh aajupdate kuch masti wala aayega .. lekin ye to aur suspence bhara tha .. jhadi me wo dono kaun the... larki kaun thi aur uske piche kaun laga hua tha aab eak car ko uske piche laga diya jisme 2 admi the lekin ye the kaun...
wo insan usko behos karke uska murder kyu karne ja raha tha kahin koi psycho to nahi...aise pechkas se to psycho hi murder karte hai.. aur unlogo ne use injection lagaya suspence bhara jabardast upu
Upu14
aab najar matt lagaoo bechari ko ..... kabhi sochne par majbur ho jata hu aap doctor ho ki professor ho ki koi shayar..
kya likhe ho bhai
kya likho bhai dono ki masti bhara pyar... sameera aagayi aab kuch razz khulenge...
Upu15 & 16

aap kya ho bhai aise aise line kahan se aajate hai dimag me ..dil chuu gaya ye wala update ..kaun hai jisne tali bajayi thi be bheed me se kitna aacha mahol tha bigad diya
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Aaj ke update me romance aur suspence ke sabhi rang maujood hain…

sahi mayane me aapne ham sabhi ko title ( ishq , pyar , muhobbat) se robaroo karwaa diya …sach hi kaha kai kisi ne ki Kalpna se pare jo hai wo ishq ki gahraayi hai… Rajesh ke sath ishq ki jane kis gahrai tak pahunch gayi Sameera…

Aur achank hi haath ka chhot jana… sare sundar najare ka syaah andhere me badal jana… kitna dard tha Sameera ki cheekh me …

ant me sapne se bahar aate hi Rajesh ki muskurati tasweer samne aur manas patal par 6 mahine ki smriya… resurch poora ho gaya hoga rajesh ka… sameera pack karne lagi saman… matlab ki Milan ki gadi aa gayi…

par suspence abb tak apne full form me hai…aaj ke update ke hisab se kaid wali ladki sameera nahi thi…to wo kaun thi… ye kaisi resurch hai jo hospital me ho rahi thi… aur sameera jab apni marji se aa jaa sakti hai to milne kyu nahi aayi … Rajesh wall par sameera se jude pic aur naam kyu likhta hai…

baap re mere kitne sare sawaal mere dimaag me ta thaiya kar rahe hain…aur koi guess nahi fit baith ra …awsm writing sir…storyagle update ki besbri se waiting
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Sir g aaj hi apki story pada hu...
Kya jabardast story hai...
Akir sameera ke sath kya hua hai...
Use kon leke gay hai...

Rajesh aur sameera me kohi galatfahemi to nahi hua na...

Waiting next update...
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Scintillating and sensuous ....
I wonder if u r an emotional reader too...
Lucky will be the girl who will place her head in ur lap with closed eyes just to listen Wat u read to her...


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It's a bliss to get true critics.
Ur prev story must be exceptional that's why ppl have huge expectations from u.
I cannt stand incest otherwise I would have read that story first thing in the morn

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Update 1

“Ishq Ne, ‘Ghalib’, Nikamma Kar Diya,
Warna Hum Bhi Aadmi The Kaam Ke.”

‘Aa gaya Ghalib ka rishte daar, ab pakayega, samajh nahi aata uncle doctor hain aur ye shayar kahan se ……’

‘Ishq hai pyaare khel nahi hai
Ishq Kaare- Sheesha –O- Aaahan’

Sala ye to dengue ki tarha bimari college mein failne lagi, ab inhen Jigar Moradabadi ka bhoot chad gaya.

Vikas ne apna sar peet liya. Jab Rakesh ke munh se bhi shayari suni, ek dost Ghalib ka chela bana baitha hai aur dusra Jigar ko tham ke baith gaya.

Shayari jitni marji karwa lo inse par ladki ke samne juban nahi khulti, tab sala juban ko lakwa maar jata hai.

‘Kya bhai Vikas, ye sar kahe ko peet rahe, itna badiya sher sunaya, yaar kuch to daad milni chahiye’ Rakesh Vikas ke pass aa kar baith gaya.

Vikas kabhi Rajan ko dekhta to kabhi Rakesh ko . Ji ye Rajan vahi hai - Ghalib ka chela.

‘Saalon mahine baad final papers hain aur tum log aashiq bane ghum rahe ho jiska koi vajood bhi nahi, Ye Ghalib ka rishte daar kabhi Rajni ke samne munh nahi khol paya, aur tujhe kya bukhaar chad gaya jo raaton raat Jigar Moradabadi ka aashiq ban gaya’

‘ tum kitabi kidon ko shayari ke bare mein kya maalum, O teri bhonsdi ke mujhe gyan de raha tujhe kaise maalum ye Jigar Moradabadi ka sher hai’

Is se pehle Vikas jawab deta uski najar library se nikalte Agyaat pe pad gayi, jaisa naam vaisi harkaten, bilkul agyaat ki tarha rehta, college, kitabein college, Jab kitabon se thak jaata to thoda waqt apne in doston ki bak bak sun vapas ya to class mein ya library mein ghus jaata.

‘Kya hua Vikas kyun chilla raha inpe, pehla saal hai college mein kuch to hawa lagegi hi’ Vo bhi vahin lawn mein tangen pasare inke pass let gaya.

‘yaar inhen bhoot chad gaya hai aashqui ka, saale fail ho jaayenge, dil karta hai dhunayi kar dun inki, chobis ghante pakate rehte hain aur ladki ek nahi patti inse’

‘Kisi Be-Kas Ko Aai Bedaad-Gar Maara To Kya Maara
Jo Aap Hi Mar Raha Ho Us Ko Gar Maara To Kya Maara’

Agyaat ke munh se ye sun to Vikas baglein jhankne laga, aur ankhen faade use aise dekhne laga jaisekoi ajooba ho vo. Jisko kabhi Chemistry ki kitabon ke alava kuch padte na dekha aaj vo bhi….

‘abe aise kya dekh raha maine nahi likhi Zauq ki hai’

‘ Dengue fail gaya aahiqui ka college mein’ Vikas badi jor se chillaya.

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